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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 261479

  1. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Diente de leche
    bajo la almohada;
    sueño profundo
     
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  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Diente de leche,
    el primero en la encía.
    Lo lame el niño.
     
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  3. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Diente de leche
    asoma en su sonrisa
    adolescente.
     
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  4. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Adolescente
    se mira en el espejo.
    ¡Cuánto ha crecido!
     
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  5. crisantemo

    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    ¡Cuanto ha crecido!
    El brote del rosal
    entre jazmines.​
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Entre jazmines,
    tu pelo es una pausa
    en la ventisca.
     
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  7. Maramin

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    En la ventisca
    se remueven las ramas.
    Llueve en el llano.
     
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    Llueve en el llano,
    en vano las esponjas
    de la gramilla.
     
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    De la gramilla
    chupan los caracoles.
    Senda babosa.
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    Senda babosa.

    En cuclillas el niño,

    entre las dalias.​
     
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  11. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Entre las dalias
    subiendo por los tallos
    los caracoles.
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Los caracoles
    juran que mis acelgas
    crecieron solas.
     
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  13. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Crecieron solas,
    margaritas silvestres
    en el prado.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    En el prado
    ramonean las vacas.
    Aguzanieves.
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    Aguzanieves.

    Empujando el rebaño

    por la cañada.​
     
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  16. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Por la cañada
    descienden las ovejas.
    Perro guardián.
     
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  17. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Perro guardián
    oye ruidos extraños;
    un conejito
     
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  18. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Un conejito
    asoma su nariz,
    la madriguera.
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    La madriguera

    en el tocón del roble.

    La nieve intacta.​
     
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    La nieve intacta
    todavía no hay huella
    de pajaritos.
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    De pajaritos

    y flores de cerezo,

    lleno el kimono.​
     
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    Lleno el kimono
    de triste lagrimeo.
    Moño deshecho
     
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    Moño desecho.

    Por el prado florido,

    una amazona.​
     
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    Una amazona
    con el cabello al aire.
    Pasa al galope.
     
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  25. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Pasa al galope
    la vida entre mis manos
    como agua escapa.
     
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    Como agua escapa
    la lágrima en mis manos,
    triste noticia.
     
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    Triste noticia.

    Buqué de crisantemos,

    rezos en bucle.​
     
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    Rezos en bucle,
    angustias que interrogan
    el firmamento.
     
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    Asklepios Incinerando envidias

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    Firmamento,
    vacío que se llena
    con la ternura
     
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    Con la ternura
    de tus cálidas manos
    mi piel sonríe.
     
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