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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 261479

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Van al oeste,
    bandada de ballenas
    en el atlántico.
     
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    En el océano
    un hipnótico arrullo
    que me adormece.
     
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  3. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Que me adormece
    en brazos de morfeo
    un mundo nuevo.
     
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    Un mundo nuevo
    en cada amanecer
    ante mis ojos.
     
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  5. MASTER LY 22

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    Ante mis ojos
    una tormenta seca,
    ganado inquieto.
     
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  6. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Ganado inquieto
    con el cambio del viento
    cabezas se alzan.
     
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  7. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Cabezas se alzan
    inquietas por los olores,
    rebaño alerta.
     
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    Rebaño alerta,
    zorros de cola roja
    merodeando.
     
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    Merodeando
    por la orilla del río,
    se oyen crujidos.
     
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  10. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Se oyen crujidos
    en el viejo desván
    de madrugada.
     
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  11. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    De madrugada
    el maullido de un gato
    da sobresalto.
     
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    Da sobresalto
    Esa feroz tormenta,
    cae granizo.
     
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    Cae granizo,
    tormenta de verano
    dañando frutos.
     
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    Dañando frutos
    en el pomar urracas
    pican manzanas
     
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  15. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Pican manzanas
    la bandada de tordos,
    algarabía.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Algarabía
    se brinda con cerveza
    corre el balón.
     
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    Corre el balón
    entre los jugadores,
    gritos y aplausos.
     
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    Gritos y aplausos
    en el circo romano
    sangre en el ruedo
     
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    Sangre en el ruedo,
    el toro es arrastrado,
    saluda el diestro.
     
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    Saluda el diestro
    a su nueva vecina
    con cortesía.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Con cortesía
    cede el paso a la dama.
    El autobús.
     
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    El autobús
    choca en la carretera.
    Densa neblina.
     
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    Densa neblina
    envuelve cada paso
    en emoción
     
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    En emoción
    se sueltan lacrimales,
    ojos llorosos.
     
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    GALA GROSSO Poeta adicto al portal

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    ojos llorosos
    filigrana de nieve
    fría ventisca
     
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    Fría ventisca
    entre los roquedales,
    labios cortados.
     
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    Labios cortados
    sociedad de la nieve
    supervivencia.
     
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    Supervivencia
    del oso bajo la nieve,
    hibernación.
     
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    Hibernación
    soledad y silencio
    no estás conmigo.
     
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    No estás conmigo
    pero tu pensamiento
    está a mi lado.
     
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