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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 261539

  1. Maramin

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    Relampaguea,
    entre las altas nubes
    tormenta seca.
     
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    Relampaguea
    olor a petricor
    vuelan libélulas.
     
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    Vuelan libélulas
    entre cañas del río,
    salta una trucha.
     
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    LUVIAM Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Salta una trucha
    sobre el agua grisácea
    río revuelto
     
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    Río revuelto,
    corrientes de las cumbres
    llenas de barro.
     
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    Llenas de barro
    en el portón quedaron
    las botas viejas
     
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    Las botas viejas
    para días de lluvia,
    cálido ocaso.
     
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    Cálido ocaso
    a finales de octubre
    la mar serena
     
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    La mar serena,
    cayucos de inmigrantes
    todos a salvo.
     
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    Todos a salvo
    después de la tormenta
    charcos de lluvia
     
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    Charcos de lluvia,
    en huecos de la acera,
    baldosas rotas.
     
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    Baldosas rotas
    en el viejo convento
    anida un pájaro
     
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    Anida un pájaro
    en copa de la encina,
    nuevos polluelos.
     
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    Nuevos polluelos
    correteando en el patio
    tras un gusano
     
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    Tras un gusano
    se apresura un erizo,
    presa sabrosa.
     
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    Presa sabrosa
    eres entre mis labios

    siempre sedientos
     
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    Siempre sedientos
    bajo el sol del verano
    los colibríes
     
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    Los colibríes
    rivalizan con flores
    por sus colores.
     
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    Por sus colores
    cerro de Purmamarca
    refulge al sol.
     
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    Refulge al sol
    la cumbre del Montseny
    llena de nieve.
     
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    Llena de nieve
    la avenida amanece
    esta mañana
     
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    Esta mañana
    el canto del jilguero
    en la ventana.
     
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    En la ventana
    la luna resplandece,
    fuera el rosal.
     
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    Fuera el rosal
    con solo las espinas,
    ninguna hoja.
     
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    Ninguna hoja
    solo escarcha en el sauce
    copos de nieve
     
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    Copos de nieve
    sobre tu pelo negro,
    vivo contraste.
     
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    Vivo contraste
    tu bella piel morena
    en blanca arena.
     
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    En blanca arena
    las huellas de tus pies
    junto a las mías.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Junto a las mías
    hay propaganda y cartas
    en tú buzón.
     
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    En tu buzón
    te he dejado un mensaje,
    carta de amor.
     
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