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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262049

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    Relampaguea,
    tronada de tormenta,
    mañana gris.
     
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    Mañana gris,
    tronco flota en el río
    gélida brisa.
     
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    Gélida brisa
    debajo de los pies
    la nieve firme
     
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    La nieve firme,
    el cervatillo duerme
    bajo el arbusto.
     
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    Bajo el arbusto
    el gato agazapado,

    un gorrioncillo.
     
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    Un gorrioncillo
    aletea incesante
    vigila un gato.
     
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    Vigila un gato
    los tejados húmedos
    en luna llena
     
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    En luna llena
    la nieve resplandece
    huellas de ciervos.
     
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    Huellas de ciervos
    en el húmedo valle,
    arriba un águila.
     
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    Arriba un águila,
    en un peñasco el nido,
    azul el cielo.
     
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    Azul el cielo,
    El humo de un avión,
    dos rayas blancas.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Dos rayas blancas
    separan las coletas
    ríe la niña
     
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    Ríe la niña
    atardecer temprano
    nubla los ojos
     
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    Nubla los ojos
    la lágrima insipiente;
    corazón manda.
     
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    Corazón manda
    si no piensa el cerebro
    la vista inmóvil
     
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    La vista inmóvil
    ignoto movimiento
    pulsos de vida
     
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    la vista inmóvil
    abiertos algodones
    atardecidos
     
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    Atardecidos
    los ojos de mi niña
    luz de mi día.
     
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    Luz de mi día
    efímeros reflejos
    al despertar
     
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    Al despertar
    las sábanas revueltas
    y tu en mis brazos.
     
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    Y tú en mis brazos
    la pradera mojada
    la primavera
     
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    La Primavera
    tiempo de transición
    infinitud
     
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    Infinitud
    aletea gaviotas
    el horizonte
     
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    El horizonte
    pálido sol oculta,

    arces desnudos.
     
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    Arces desnudos
    mis pies sobre el dorado
    la magia en mi
     
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    La magia en mi
    cuando observo las hojas
    bailando al viento.
     
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    Bailando al viento
    las hojas de los árboles,
    tiempo otoñal.
     
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    Tiempo otoñal
    los estorninos migran
    volando bajo.
     
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    Volando bajo
    los vencejos indican
    día de lluvia.
     
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    Día de lluvia
    se resguarda una alondra
    relampaguea
     
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