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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262103

  1. Maramin

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    La cucaracha
    espera oscuridad,
    sale de noche.
     
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    Sale de noche
    la misteriosa dama,
    el solo observa.
     
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    LUVIAM Poeta veterano en el portal

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    El sol observa
    su reflejo rojizo
    sobre las olas
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Sobre las olas
    saltando los delfines
    juegan alegres.
     
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  5. marlene2m

    marlene2m Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Juegan alegres
    mariposas monarcas
    Jazmín azul.
     
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  6. dragon_ecu

    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    Jazmín azul
    pétalos perfumados
    de sensaciones...
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    De sensaciones
    frías y calurosas,
    contradicción.
     
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    Contradicción,
    en el gélido invierno
    sin chimeneas.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Sin chimeneas
    donde encender un fuego.
    Mantas y mantas.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Mantas y mantas
    donan de corazón
    a refugiados.

     
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    Dvaldés Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    A refugiados
    dan ropas invernales.
    Ulula el viento.
     
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    Ulula el viento
    en la noche invernal,
    asusta al niño.
     
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    Dvaldés Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Asusta al niño
    el sonido del viento.
    Se oculta un gato.
     
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    Se oculta un gato
    bajo del coche negro,
    Negro con negro.
     
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    Dvaldés Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Negro con negro,
    noche de oscuras nubes.

    Sin parar llueve.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Sin parar llueve
    dentro del corazón
    desde tu ausencia.
     
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    Dvaldés Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Desde tu ausencia
    eternas son las noches.
    Gélido invierno.
     
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    Gélido invierno.
    Bajo los pies la escarcha
    y mi silencio.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Y mi silencio
    confirma tus razones,
    ya no hay más dudas.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Ya no hay mas dudas
    con tanto parloteo
    se van los peces.
     
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    Se van los peces
    muertos al sumidero.
    Las aguas tóxicas.
     
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    José Luis Galarza Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Las aguas tóxicas
    rápido envenamiento.
    Tensión de vida.
     
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    Tensión de vida
    bajo la dura guerra,
    crueldad humana.
     
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    Crueldad humana
    duros como la roca.
    Sin nuevas lágrimas.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Sin nuevas lágrimas
    espera, con paciencia,
    final dictamen.
     
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    José Luis Galarza Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Final dictamen
    eco de los minutos
    demora y pulso
     
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    Demora y pulso
    hacen la diferencia
    recuerda siempre.
     
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    José Luis Galarza Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Recuerda siempre
    la gota llega al mar
    hombres al tiempo
     
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    Hombres al tiempo
    jalando de las redes,
    brillos de plata.
     
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    Brillos de plata
    entre mis dedos trémulos,
    pasión que abrasa.
     
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