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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262266

  1. Cirhian

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    Flota una nana
    en aires de mañana
    ave o campana.​
     
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    Ave o campana,
    el sonido en el aire
    deja gran eco.
     
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    Deja gran eco
    inmensa roca al caer.
    Huye la cabra.
     
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    Huye la cabra;
    la hierba en la pradera
    colina abajo.​
     
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    Colina abajo
    el río de la magma,
    volcán ardiente​
     
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    Volcán ardiente,
    ceniza junto al lago;
    ladran los perros.​
     
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    Ladran los perros
    al paso de un extraño,
    el peregrino.
     
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    El peregrino
    tiene lo pies llagados,
    la fe intacta.
     
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    La fe intacta
    aún con tantos males,
    hay esperanza.
     
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    Hay esperanza
    en todas las semillas
    que lleva el viento.
     
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    ¿Qué lleva el viento?
    Aromas de las flores
    primaverales.
     
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    Primaverales
    son las aguas del río,
    patos nadando.
     
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    Patos nadando
    en medio del estanque,
    todos en fila.
     
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    Todos en fila,
    manzanos florecidos,
    en la campiña.
     
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    En la campiña
    los surcos bien derechos,
    mula y arado.
     
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    Mula y arado
    trabajan sin descanso
    la tierra fértil.
     
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    La tierra fértil
    el abono y el riego
    del campesino.
     
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    Del campesino
    fiel amigo el caballo
    y su guitarra.
     
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    Y su guitarra
    olvidada en un rincón,
    la casa sola.
     
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    La casa sola
    rosales marchitados,
    las tejas rotas.
     
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    Las tejas rotas
    por viento huracanado.
    Árbol caído.
     
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    Árbol caído
    cobija nueva vida.
    Un ratoncillo.
     
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    Un ratoncillo
    inquieto en la cocina,
    gato dormido.
     
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    Gato dormido
    sobre las alpargatas
    del abuelito.
     
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    Del abuelito
    los ronquidos en sueño,
    sonrisa vaga.
     
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    Sonrisa vaga
    la de ese jovenzuelo
    de pasos lentos.
     
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    De pasos lentos
    por el borde del río,
    la lavandera.
     
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    La lavandera
    cantando junto al río,
    la ropa al sol.
     
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    Bueno, la lavandera es un ave, pero acepto tu interpretación.

    La ropa al sol,
    su blancura resalta
    sobre la hierba.
     
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    No lo sabia maestro, gracias por la info :)

    Sobre la hierba
    jóvenes abrazados.
    Es primavera.
     
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