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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7801 | Views: 262550

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Hay luna llena
    la Dama de la Noche
    abre sus pétalos.
     
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  2. cesarfco.cd

    cesarfco.cd Corrector Corrector/a

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    Abre sus pétalos
    recibiendo el rocío
    amanecer.
     
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  3. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Suprimo "del" ya que se alarga;

    Amanecer
    sin nada de frescura,
    la tierra seca
     
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  4. Fenix_Poet

    Fenix_Poet Poeta fiel al portal

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    la tierra seca,
    rezos en los hogares,
    el hambre acecha
     
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    El hambre acecha,
    las guerras todo arrasan.
    impera el mal.
     
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  6. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Impera el mal
    en montañas de escombros
    los niños juegan.
     
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  7. Maramin

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    Los niños juegan,
    con pistolas de agua
    hacen sus guerras.
     
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  8. carmen viviana

    carmen viviana Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hacen sus guerras

    gaviotas y ballenas

    mezclan sus voces​
     
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  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Mezclan sus voces
    los hinchas en el fútbol,
    animadoras.
     
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  10. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Animadoras
    las mañanas de agosto
    fresca es la aurora.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Fresca es la aurora
    mas pronto el sol calienta.
    Uvas maduras.
     
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  12. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Uvas maduras
    más lejos de mi alcance
    !Estaràn verdes!
     
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    ¿Estarán verdes
    los higos que negrean?
    Duros al tacto.
     
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  14. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Duros al tacto
    protegidos por su piel
    dulces melones.
     
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  15. Fenix_Poet

    Fenix_Poet Poeta fiel al portal

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    Dulces melones,
    de esmeraldas y soles
    visten al campo
     
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  16. carmen viviana

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    Visten al campo

    las espigas de trigo

    y los mosquitos​
     
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  17. El regreso de Alfonsina

    El regreso de Alfonsina Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Y los mosquitos
    a la puerta en las casas,
    noche en Castilla
     
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  18. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    Noche en Castilla
    rosquillas panaderas
    hornos de leña
     
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    Hornos de leña,
    cada casa del pueblo
    cuenta con uno.
     
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  20. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    Cuenta con uno
    el perro espera el pienso
    moviendo el rabo.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Moviendo el rabo
    muestra sus sentimientos,
    el gato avisa.
     
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    El gato avisa
    erizado y bufando
    presto a la lucha.
     
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    Presto a la lucha
    del día se levanta,
    está lloviendo.
     
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  24. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

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    Está lloviendo
    todo adquiere un color
    recién pintado.
     
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    Recién pintado
    con tizas un buen cuadro
    sobre la acera.
     
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    Sobre la acera
    tumbado por el viento
    escarabajo.
     
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    Escarabajo,
    construye con sus patas
    una pelota.
     
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    Una pelota
    los niños la persiguen
    a todo ajenos.
     
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    A todo ajenos
    los astros relucientes
    prenden el cielo.
     
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  30. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Prenden el cielo
    fuegos artificiales
    fin de las fiestas.
     
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