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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by F. Marcos, Apr 5, 2024. Replies: 2 | Views: 292

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    En la rama pía
    un gorrión celoso.
    Amargo sabor.
     
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    Es un bello senryu acorde a las épocas de primavera. Tiene haimi (esencia haiku).

    Me perdí en sabor o savor... spanish or english.

    Saludos.
     
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    dragon-ecu, disculpa por mi torpeza al no repasarlo (las prisas no son buenas). El "spanish torpe" agradece tu comprensión. Un abrazo.
     
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