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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lluviadeabril, Dec 10, 2009. Replies: 12 | Views: 1285

  1. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Vanish me today,
    tomorrow I won’t be here.
    Yesterday, I left.
     
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    lluviadeabril, Dec 10, 2009
  2. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado


    Amazing, it´s an englisn haiku, and besides... it has so much on it with te tima as your toy, exellent.
    A pleasure to read you, hugs.
     
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    Redwing, Dec 10, 2009
  3. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I am still practicing in spanish -for me quite a challenge still because of accents, etc. -

    I appreciate your visit and kind comments. :)
     
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    lluviadeabril, Dec 10, 2009
  4. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    I really enjoyed reading this, I think it is very beautiful.
     
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    Winterfairy, Dec 11, 2009
  5. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Thank you so much! I am flattered out of smiles.

    A huge hug.
     
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    lluviadeabril, Dec 11, 2009
  6. Mask

    Mask Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    what?

    mis stars.....jajajaja...
    no sé ingles...jejeje
     
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    Mask, Dec 13, 2009
  7. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Te lo traduzco porque me gusto y porque agradezco un montonzote tu visita. :)

    Desaparéceme/Corréeme ahora,
    mañana no estaré
    ayer me fui.
     
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    lluviadeabril, Dec 13, 2009
  8. Isabel Miranda de Robles

    Isabel Miranda de Robles Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Ayer ya te perdio,
    manana no sabras a recuerdo,
    hoy sabes a pasion...

    Me gusta leerte, el martini de versos, no caeria nada mal. Solo falta el donde y el cuando. ISABEL
     
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    Isabel Miranda de Robles, Dec 13, 2009
  9. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    "Ayer ya te perdio,
    manana no sabras a recuerdo,
    hoy sabes a pasion..."

    Me encanto. Ya veras, ese martini nos espera a la vuelta de la esquina : )

    Un abrazo..
     
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    lluviadeabril, Dec 13, 2009
  10. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    I really enjoyed your poem. It is short, but amazing. It is a pleasure being here.
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Dec 13, 2009
  11. 19.8.2010

    19.8.2010 Poeta recién llegado

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    Wow, I like it.Your poem gives me a sense of suspension. Good read,
    Roxane
     
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    19.8.2010, Dec 13, 2009
  12. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind comments.
    I love that cat on your signature -she's gorgeous!

    :::hug:::
     
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    lluviadeabril, Dec 14, 2009
  13. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Thank you Roxanne for stopping by. I am ecstatic that you liked it!

    :::hug:::
     
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    lluviadeabril, Dec 14, 2009

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