1. Guest, ven y descarga gratuitamente el cuarto número de nuestra revista literaria digital "Eco y Latido"

    !!!Te va a encantar, no te la pierdas!!!

    Dismiss Notice

Lagrima

Discussion in 'Poemas Melancólicos (Tristes)' started by german daniel, Nov 20, 2009. Replies: 6 | Views: 475

  1. german daniel

    german daniel Poeta recién llegado

    Joined:
    Nov 19, 2009
    Messages:
    14
    Likes Received:
    1
    Quisiera ser una lagrima .
    Salir de tus ojos
    acariciar tus mejillas
    y morir en tu boca.
     
    #1
    german daniel, Nov 20, 2009
    Maramin and (deleted member) like this.
  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

    Joined:
    Feb 19, 2008
    Messages:
    66,186
    Likes Received:
    41,902
    Gender:
    Male
    Bonito y piropeador ...:::banana:::

    [​IMG]
     
    #2
    Maramin, Nov 20, 2009
  3. german daniel

    german daniel Poeta recién llegado

    Joined:
    Nov 19, 2009
    Messages:
    14
    Likes Received:
    1
    gracias querido !!!!!
     
    #3
    german daniel, Nov 20, 2009
  4. Zálassas

    Zálassas Poeta recién llegado

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2009
    Messages:
    101
    Likes Received:
    2
    Corto pero intenso poema!
    Me gusta el recorrido de esa lágrima.
    Un saludo!!
     
    #4
    Zálassas, Nov 20, 2009
  5. Gaston

    Gaston Poeta recién llegado

    Joined:
    Nov 18, 2009
    Messages:
    23
    Likes Received:
    1
    con pocas palabras se forma un poema hermoso.
    saludos y abrazos...:::banana:::
     
    #5
    Gaston, Nov 20, 2009
  6. german daniel

    german daniel Poeta recién llegado

    Joined:
    Nov 19, 2009
    Messages:
    14
    Likes Received:
    1
    gracias colega .

    gracias
     
    #6
    german daniel, Nov 20, 2009
  7. german daniel

    german daniel Poeta recién llegado

    Joined:
    Nov 19, 2009
    Messages:
    14
    Likes Received:
    1
    ok espero que pronto lea el tuyo amigo
     
    #7
    german daniel, Nov 21, 2009

Share This Page