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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Guerrion, Mar 8, 2020. Replies: 8 | Views: 631

  1. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Dear,
    with or without my Mexican hat
    take advantage, abuse me, breath by breath.

    Let me kiss,
    with sweet slowness,
    those beautiful jewels
    that grow on top of your breasts.

    I am feeling
    the tickling desire for...
    a few precious moments,
    that you call me by my name
    while wandering through your hips
    and hollow fruit that’s lying inside your lips.

    This isn’t a lovely poem,
    those thoughts are somehow
    beyond me…these words
    were written for...oh, something took my memory.!

    I have coined
    a suggestive poem,
    please, forgive me If I stumble.

    Fidel Guerra. March 7, 2020~

     
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  2. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    What a beautiful poem Fidel so full of our lingo and our land, it reminded me of a poem by a Chicana poet Sandra Cisneros (not my relative)

    Dulzura by Sandra Cisneros
    Make love to me in Spanish.
    Not with that other tongue.
    I want you juntito a mi
    tender like the language
    crooned to babies.
    I want to be that
    lullabied, mi bien
    querrido
    , that loved.

    I want you inside
    the mouth of my heart,
    inside the harp of my wrists,
    the sweet meat of the mango,
    in the gold that dangles
    from my ears and neck.

    Say my name. Say it.
    The way it's supposed to be said.
    I want to know that I knew you
    even before I knew you.
     
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  3. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Guadalupe,
    I love the poem you shared with me...
    I haven’t read Sandra yet but her poetry is just the way I would like mine to be.
    Thank you for coming around and taking a look at my crazy writings.
    Some of these ideas came to me, long time ago while listening and dancing to Pegasso….

    Oh memories,
    time and time and never on time;
    the only time these will be on time
    is when we are done, then, dear Guadalupe,
    we will have them all...


    Saludos, hugs and kisses with care,
    Fidel Guerra Cuevas.
     
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  4. NUBE ATARDECER

    NUBE ATARDECER Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    hi how are you doing?

    I love this poem.

    It shows a big and deep feeling¡¡

    Literary greetings¡¡
     
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  5. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Nube atardecer,
    I don’t know what to say, my words get stiff when I get surprising comments for my humble ideas.
    I won’t lie to you, when I write in English I walk to the refrigerator and switch to an american beer and music.

    In fact,
    I am touched deeply by the memories this poem brings out, which, unfortunately,
    I have a hard time avoiding because she’s a daily gift of life, but no longer for my eyes...someone's else.

    Saludos,
    Fidel.
     
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  6. Now.. this is what I'm talking about soldier...

    tingling sensations in noah's ark... no need to apologize
     
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  7. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Gus,
    you’re funny dude….
    but no, there’s nothing hidden in the closet.
    I don’t know if you’ve ever noticed that I hardly laugh
    in words, it’s just to weird for me to even giggle this way.

    A message like yours
    is a prime favorite of all my macho feelings,
    because, its very appearance suggests that I’m a mystery.

    I love flowers, cooking,
    sharpening my nails,
    novelas, tea, bingo,
    I’m a real man,
    truly.!

    damn hangover...I'm having birria de chivo para eso.

    Saludos,
    Fidel Guerra.

     
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  8. No bro..
    I don't have any doubts about your manhood...no is not like that at all.
    I meant to send tingling.. shivering chills to women with your solicitations...is all good.
    you lay the trap.. and they fall in it twice. .
     
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  9. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Gustavo,
    I wasn’t trying to explain my sexual orientation.
    I just had had a moment of misunderstanding, but definitely, it is a better tune.

    Estimado Gus,
    I brought you roses y un piruli... Just kidding.!


    Thank you for your, now, familiar visits.

    Saludos,
    Fidel Guerra.
     
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