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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by lobo111, Apr 23, 2013. Replies: 4 | Views: 539

  1. lobo111

    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Soles y lunas
    Adornan tu ventana
    Cuando te asomas
     
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    lobo111, Apr 23, 2013
  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Con un primer verso inverosimil presentas este senryû piropeador...:S

    Me encantaría que procuraras hacerlo mejor. Tú puedes...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Apr 24, 2013
  3. lobo111

    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    OK. mister maramin, gracias por el consejo
     
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    lobo111, Apr 25, 2013
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    me gusta!!! un abrazo Don Lobo.
     
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    Coplero, Apr 25, 2013
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    lobo111 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Chido Don Coplero, abrazos
     
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    lobo111, Apr 25, 2013

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