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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7754 | Views: 255163

  1. Maramin

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    Cuando me miras
    se me eriza la piel,
    me da tembleque.
     
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    Me da tembleque
    el horizonte oscuro,
    invernal tarde.
     
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    Invernal tarde,
    al azote del viento
    copos de nieve.
     
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    Copos de nieve
    como besos de Judas
    caen de tus ojos.
     
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    Caen de tus ojos
    lágrimas de alegría,
    tanta es la risa.
    .
     
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    Tanta es la risa
    ilusión en las caras
    son los payasos.
     
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    Son los payasos
    los que alegran a niños
    en hospitales.
     
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    En hospitales
    curan entre algodones
    la vida vuela.
     
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    La vida vuela
    debemos disfrutarla
    al aire libre.
     
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    la vida vuela...
    los pétalos se juntan
    con las cenizas...
     
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    al aire libre...
    la fresca bocanada
    del cigarrillo
     
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    Del cigarrillo
    que fumamos a medias
    solo hay humo.
     
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    Solo hay humo,
    cenicientas colinas
    y muchas lágrimas.

     
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    Y muchas lágrimas
    por triste desconsuelo,
    la gran riada.
     
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    la gran riada...
    el sol surge de nuevo
    vuelve a empezar...
     
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    Vuelve a empezar
    el ciclo estacional,
    un nuevo año.
     
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    Un nuevo año
    y la oportunidad
    de ser mejores.
     
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    de ser mejores
    de derrotas y triunfos
    es el camino
     
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    Es el camino
    la línea tortuosa
    hacia el futuro.
     
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    Hacia el futuro
    vuela blanca paloma.
    Hoja de olivo
     
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    Hoja de olivo
    que vuela del vareo
    red en el suelo.
     
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    Red en el suelo,
    los peces atrapados
    colean vivos.
     
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    Colean vivos
    los pardos renacuajos
    en el estanque.
     
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    En el estanque
    las hojas del castaño
    como una alfombra.
     
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    Como una alfombra
    hojarasca de pino,
    corren ardillas.
     
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    Corren ardillas
    al ruido de petardos
    es año nuevo.
     
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    Es año nuevo,
    amanece nublado
    triste y sombrío.
     
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    Triste y sombrío
    deja de oírse el canto
    de la cigarra.
     
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    de la cigarra
    el silencio le espera
    con su chirrido
     
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    Con su chirrido
    se abre la vieja puerta
    frío invernal.
     
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