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  1. danie

    danie solo un pensamiento...

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    Playa nudista
    el ego de aquel hombre
    se encoge al verlo.     ​
     
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  2. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    El cielo negro
    trueno ensordecedor
    que arranca el agua.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Nov 15, 2017
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  3. Mar_

    Mar_ Invitado

    Fuerte tormenta
    invisibilidad
    corte de tránsito.    ​
     
    #273
    Mar_, Nov 15, 2017
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  4. Mar_

    Mar_ Invitado

    Viento del Este
    despeina soledades
    yacen en paz.    ​
     
    #274
    Mar_, Nov 15, 2017
  5. Angelito el entrerriano

    Angelito el entrerriano Poeta fiel al portal

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    En mis colores
    se quedó lo que diste
    tu amor y el mío.
     
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    Angelito el entrerriano, Nov 15, 2017
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  6. Mar_

    Mar_ Invitado

    oscuridad
    llanto de soledades
    tromba nocturna    ​
     
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    Mar_, Nov 18, 2017
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  7. Nancysant

    Nancysant Poeta que no puede vivir sin el portal

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    Descolorido

    va pasando el otoño

    hacia el invierno.​
     
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    Nancysant, Nov 19, 2017
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  8. Hechicera de palabras

    Hechicera de palabras Invitado

    Gardenias blancas
    mecidas por el viento
    de la llanura.
     
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    Hechicera de palabras, Nov 22, 2017
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  9. MaríaA.G

    MaríaA.G Poeta veterana en el Portal

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    Pasa la Luna
    entre los matorrales
    ágora de luz    ​
     
    #279
    MaríaA.G, Nov 27, 2017
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  10. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    DICIEMBRE
    Solo se admiten 5 haikus mensuales ​
    lluvia de un día
    entre grietas de tierra
    nace la vida.
     
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  11. dragon_ecu

    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    con frío al norte

    y el sur acalorado


    novenas vienen
     
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  12. Luis Adolfo

    Luis Adolfo Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    ¿Dónde la lluvia?
    Ceniza el cielo; ¿cuándo?
    Seco silencio     ​
     
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    Luis Adolfo, Dec 3, 2017
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  13. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Nieve en las cumbres,
    cercana en su esplendor
    la luna llena.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Dec 3, 2017
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  14. Angelito el entrerriano

    Angelito el entrerriano Poeta fiel al portal

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    Luz en las sombras,
    que por amor se agranda
    el sol, la tierra
     
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    Angelito el entrerriano, Dec 3, 2017
  15. Luis Adolfo

    Luis Adolfo Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    gotas de lluvia
    música de natura
    en mis ventanas    ​
     
    #285
    Luis Adolfo, Dec 3, 2017
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    notremaison Poeta fiel al portal

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    Haiku

    En colmenar
    zumban cientos de abejas.
    Aromo en flor.    ​
     
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    notremaison, Dec 5, 2017
  17. notremaison

    notremaison Poeta fiel al portal

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    Haiku

    Cerezos blancos

    bordean el sendero.

    Vuelan las grullas.    ​
     
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    notremaison, Dec 5, 2017
  18. notremaison

    notremaison Poeta fiel al portal

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    El manantial
    refleja las sakuras.
    Límpido cielo.
    En éste haiku se observa el kigo en el segundo verso, pero sin mencionar el nombre de la estación.

    Sakuras: (Flores de cerezo.)
    El kireji o corte de pensamiento, está determinado por: Límpido cielo
    Manantial: palabra aguda= + 1 sílaba
     
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    notremaison, Dec 5, 2017
  19. MARIANNE

    MARIANNE MARIAN GONZALES - CORAZÓN DE LOBA

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    XIV.

    En mi estadío
    aves turbias y nómadas
    danzan el cielo.



    MARIANNE*
     
    #289
    MARIANNE, Dec 6, 2017
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  20. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Río de lava
    insensible a su paso
    quema la vida.
     
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    notremaison Poeta fiel al portal

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    La mariposa
    liba los crisantemos.
    La brisa fresca.
    ​
     
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    notremaison, Dec 6, 2017
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    fría blancura
    nieve amontonada​

    mono mojado
     
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  23. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Golpe de viento,
    recibe el paseante
    lluvia de hojas.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Dec 8, 2017
  24. MARIANNE

    MARIANNE MARIAN GONZALES - CORAZÓN DE LOBA

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    ......

    Canto de Luna
    en mis muros, añoras
    mis fríos auges.


    Marianne*
     
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    MARIANNE, Dec 8, 2017
  25. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Nieve en la sierra,
    ensayan ya los niños
    los villancicos.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Dec 8, 2017
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Árbol de luz,
    se ha disfrazado el pino
    de Nochebuena.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Dec 8, 2017
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Hielo y escarcha,
    los tallos retorcidos
    de los geranios.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Dec 8, 2017
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    Angelito el entrerriano Poeta fiel al portal

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    El sol , el agua
    son espejos de ella,
    entre mis vientos
     
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    Angelito el entrerriano, Dec 9, 2017
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  29. MaríaA.G

    MaríaA.G Poeta veterana en el Portal

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    Tarde lluviosa
    se marcan los pezones
    bajo la blusa.


    Pots…..256

    Pagina 9

    Autor: danie
     
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    MaríaA.G, Dec 10, 2017
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  30. Oncina

    Oncina Têtard terrible

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    Nieve en la cresta
    el vértice horadado
    cima de nubes    ​
     
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    Oncina, Dec 11, 2017
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