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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 22, 2019. Replies: 16 | Views: 962

  1. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    El viento silba
    con su canto de cisne
    casi muriendo.

    Llego al último pétalo,
    es el fin, no me quiere.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 22, 2019
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    bristy Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Un poquito triste pero igual me gustó, el concepto. Placer leerte, un abrazo
     
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    bristy, Jan 23, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias mil.
    Un abrazo.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 24, 2019
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  4. Azalea

    Azalea Invitado

    Es tan hermoso su tanka, compañero, afortunadamente, lo de los pétalos no siempre funciona, a mi casi siempre me salía me quiere!! Y no!! jajaja
    Saludos. Azalea.
     
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    Azalea, Jan 28, 2019
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  5. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Si, pero la ilusión del momento no te la quita nadie:), y si no te quiere pues se lo pierde.
    Gracias.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Feb 18, 2019
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    Alecctriplem Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Ay amigo que bello y a su vez nostálgico , un fin repentino.
    Un placer.
     
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    Alecctriplem, Feb 28, 2019
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    Mary Mura Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Compañero Ruben Alonso Pepper como siempre un placer pasar a visitarte
     
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    Mary Mura, Mar 1, 2019
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Precioso Tanka Rubén. Un gran abrazo
     
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    María Baena, Mar 4, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias , compañera.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Mar 6, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias ,dulce María.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Mar 6, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Otro para tí, Maria.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Mar 6, 2019
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    El otoño amoroso dejando ese abandono que recrea todavia cantos
    desde la solemnidad de algo que se pierde. muy hermosa la vision.
    saludos amables de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Mar 9, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias Carlos.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Mar 13, 2019
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Me agrada la respuesta para mi comentario. Deseo tomar iniciativa y leer nuevamente este apreciado y bello ejercicio de poesia sensorial. gracias. luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Mar 14, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Mar 22, 2019
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    MARIANNE MARIAN GONZALES - CORAZÓN DE LOBA

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    Un grandioso escritor,grato leerte
     
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    MARIANNE, Mar 26, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias Marianne.
     
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