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Hat the night

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by LuKaS, Oct 2, 2013. Replies: 7 | Views: 894

  1. LuKaS

    LuKaS L'enfant terrible

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    Behind the walls awaits more life
    but there's no sight of it at night
    I have with me a sharpened knife
    but still can't see no brighter light
    than slightly blade reflecting right
    away with me more sounds of cries
    the tail of shapes tricks on my mind
    the storm that came from other side
    surrounds no more that's all its might
    And then ,just then... the end arrived
     
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  2. Amelia Duna

    Amelia Duna Poeta recién llegado

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    Like you were in the back of an alley greeting all possibilities, the night it self. Great reading you.
     
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    LuKaS L'enfant terrible

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    Kinda. Thanks 4 coming.
     
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  4. Mary C. López

    Mary C. López Una mujer de líneas y procesos.

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    LuKaS L'enfant terrible

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  6. LaBellaSarita

    LaBellaSarita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    My Lukas! Reading you will always be a pleasure of mine! I absolutely loved this poem! The night (my favorite time of the day) + you (my favorte poet) = One happy lady :D :::hug:::
     
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    LuKaS L'enfant terrible

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    My dear; beloved Sarita, everytime you came along with me, it's a peaceful moment I think. No word for it. It's something special. Thanks you.
     
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  8. Domenech

    Domenech Poeta recién llegado

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    I liked to read your poem, after all you ended using the knife to create life in a few words... isn't it enough, at least, for a while? When the storm pass you can look outside, watch the sun switching the light among cotton clouds and feel yourself more hopeful than ever...
    PS: Just a little question, why hat?
     
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