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Bullets of emptiness

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by alexisvalentin, Dec 28, 2009. Replies: 2 | Views: 779

  1. alexisvalentin

    alexisvalentin Poeta recién llegado

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    Dark days of dryness and emptiness,
    only the world knows how I feel
    when the wind stops dancing around me
    and the noises of the night destroy my will.


    Yesterday the time was longer than usual,
    lightings of hearts and dreams,
    lonely footsteps all around me
    and the dying morning screams.


    War and sadness under dark skies,
    fast bullets sick of hate and power,
    our freedom conditioned by the black gold,
    sleeping I could survive our last hour.


    What is the reason to cover your eyes
    with shadowed stars and shabby stripes?
    If in the deepest part of your conscience
    you can still hear the explosions and the cries.


    When do you decide that everyone is wrong except you?
     
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  2. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    wowow...that was nice!..this is the first time I read you, I'm glad that I did it. Welcome to Babel!!. LOVED your poem, honestly. I invite you to read some of mine.
    Love, Pemb :::sorpresa1:::
     
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  3. alexisvalentin

    alexisvalentin Poeta recién llegado

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    Thank you, Pemberley, for your comment. It had been a pleasure for me to receive your visit!! Hugs.:::hug:::
     
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