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Naufrago -haiku- (XVIII)

Discussion in 'Poemas Melancólicos (Tristes)' started by Bruno Insurgente, Jul 7, 2009. Replies: 8 | Views: 625

  1. Bruno Insurgente

    Bruno Insurgente Poeta fiel al portal

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    Expira la mar​

    el viento sopla hiere​

    nuestro palpitar​
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    Bruno Insurgente, Jul 7, 2009
  2. Gigi

    Gigi Dueña de mi vida y de mis sueños

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    bello pensamiento Bruno, muy emotivo.

    un abrazo poeta.
     
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    Gigi, Jul 7, 2009
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    Violeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Muy buen haiku, encantador final.

    Besos.
     
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    Violeta, Jul 7, 2009
  4. Bruno Insurgente

    Bruno Insurgente Poeta fiel al portal

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    Muchisimas gracias Gigi
    un abrazo
     
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    Bruno Insurgente, Jul 10, 2009
  5. Bruno Insurgente

    Bruno Insurgente Poeta fiel al portal

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    un placer tenerte en mis letras
    gracias Violeta
     
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    Bruno Insurgente, Jul 10, 2009
  6. Gargola_13

    Gargola_13 Poeta recién llegado

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    impecables imagenes
    un abrazo una vez mas
     
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    Gargola_13, Jul 10, 2009
  7. Bruno Insurgente

    Bruno Insurgente Poeta fiel al portal

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    Muchas gracias amigo, por masar pot odos mis versos. Saludos
     
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    Bruno Insurgente, Jul 16, 2009
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    cesarfco.cd Corrector Corrector/a

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    Buen Haiku, Bruno.

    Saludos.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Jul 16, 2009
  9. Bruno Insurgente

    Bruno Insurgente Poeta fiel al portal

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    muchisimas gracias cesar, un placer
     
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    Bruno Insurgente, Jul 16, 2009

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