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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lordtever, Aug 23, 2008. Replies: 4 | Views: 873

  1. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    Seeing trough the sheets
    those who cover my bed
    awakening from the eternal dream
    of happyness and doubts
    I take I look around
    seeing the mess I've become
    the clothes on the floor
    the dirt in the walls,
    they seem a lot like me
    a guy with no peace.​
     
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    lordtever, Aug 23, 2008
  2. junco

    junco Poeta recién llegado

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    I've enjoyed reading your poem. It reflects nice, hard "images". See you.
     
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    junco, Aug 23, 2008
  3. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    thank you!
     
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    lordtever, Aug 24, 2008
  4. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Interesting, what a mess! Thank you for sharing.
     
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    poroeta, Sep 3, 2008
  5. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    we all are mess
     
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    lordtever, Jan 22, 2011

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