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When i think about you..

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by israelqx, Apr 2, 2008. Replies: 9 | Views: 1278

  1. israelqx

    israelqx Poeta recién llegado

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    when i think about you,
    about how beautiful you are,
    i can't help those butterflies,
    flying all around.

    when i think about you,
    about your gorgeous eyes,
    my heart starts bumping,
    threatening me to die.

    when i think about you,
    about how great you are,
    it makes me want to spend with you,
    my whole entire life.

    when i think about you,
    about you not being mine,
    my mind goes crazy,
    my heart only... slows down.
     
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    israelqx, Apr 2, 2008
  2. Gerardito

    Gerardito Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    nice poem bro... is my pleasure read u... my stars 4 u a hug:)
     
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    Gerardito, Apr 2, 2008
  3. israelqx

    israelqx Poeta recién llegado

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    tks so much, im glad u liked it and im glad u liked it :D im waiting for ur next publications... so hurry up :D
     
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    israelqx, Apr 3, 2008
  4. BORRADO4

    BORRADO4 Poeta fiel al portal

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    that`s exactly what i feel when he`s not around....beautyful poem
    xxx `n stars 4 u!!:::hug::::::hug::::::hug:::
     
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    BORRADO4, May 8, 2008
  5. fragilprincesa

    fragilprincesa Poeta asiduo al portal

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    what a great poem!!!
    hope to read more from you :)
     
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    fragilprincesa, May 16, 2008
  6. israelqx

    israelqx Poeta recién llegado

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    thank you!! im glad u liked it! ill read some of u! tks :D
     
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    israelqx, May 25, 2008
  7. israelqx

    israelqx Poeta recién llegado

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    thank you so much! hope we can read each other more often.
     
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    israelqx, May 25, 2008
  8. Ingrid Martinez

    Ingrid Martinez Poeta asiduo al portal

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    I love this poem... It's great, fabulous... So, is "perfect"... Good job!!
     
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    Ingrid Martinez, May 28, 2008
  9. BORRADO3

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    Beutiful poem, a little sad but with Beautiful feelings..

    Was a pleasure visit you..
    Kisses for you...
     
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    BORRADO3, May 28, 2008
  10. israelqx

    israelqx Poeta recién llegado

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    tks very much! i havent written for a while but ill be uploading soon! =) Tks
     
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    israelqx, Oct 15, 2008

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