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When I’m without you

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by dacofee, Sep 18, 2007. Replies: 10 | Views: 1672

  1. dacofee

    dacofee Poeta adicto al portal

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    I can’t stand this anymore
    It’s your love what I need more
    I can’t stop loving you
    I don’t know what to do.

    Everyday is agony
    It’s sadness what I feel.
    Every day that comes and goes
    It’s causing pain to my soul.

    What the hell I’m going to do?
    My heart fall into pieces
    I’m breaking in two
    Cause I’m without you.
     
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    dacofee, Sep 18, 2007
  2. dacofee

    dacofee Poeta adicto al portal

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    gracias por tu comentario, angel
     
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    dacofee, Sep 18, 2007
  3. ozziemg

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    Well...I have to say that you have a way with words! This is a beautiful poem my friend. MAy God continue to bless you and inspire you.
    Osvaldo
     
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    ozziemg, Oct 1, 2007
  4. dacofee

    dacofee Poeta adicto al portal

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    gracias por tus buenos deseos osvaldo
     
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    dacofee, Oct 1, 2007
  5. Felipe Antonio Santorelli

    Felipe Antonio Santorelli Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Vaya vaya, dominas muy bien el inglés y este poema te quedó de película, te luciste cariño, mis estrellas para tí.
     
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    Felipe Antonio Santorelli, Nov 6, 2007
  6. dacofee

    dacofee Poeta adicto al portal

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    gracias...
     
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    dacofee, Nov 6, 2007
  7. Gustavo Cervantes

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    what the hell am I going to do. If my heart is falling for You.?
    ..beautiful darling!

    love..
     
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    Gustavo Cervantes, Nov 17, 2007
  8. dacofee

    dacofee Poeta adicto al portal

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    gracias por pasar dejando tu huella.
     
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    dacofee, Nov 17, 2007
  9. neumman

    neumman Poeta recién llegado

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    bueeno... me gusto tu esfuerzo por hacerlo en inglés... pero honestamente, no me parece muy profundo, pero bueno está bien para ser en otro idioma... saludos
     
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    neumman, Nov 17, 2007
  10. dacofee

    dacofee Poeta adicto al portal

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    Agradezco el comentario pero creo que solo quien lo escribe sabe que tan profundo es el poema.
     
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    dacofee, Nov 17, 2007
  11. elizuriel

    elizuriel Invitado

    I think you could go to found he, 'cause you need so much his love...
    Good poem...
    I like it...
    I feel that sometimes...
    Bye... kisses... D.T.B.

    I don't speak english so good... But I try...
     
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    elizuriel, Jan 15, 2008

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