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The Void of Hell

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by K-rolissa, Oct 29, 2008. Replies: 5 | Views: 1091

  1. K-rolissa

    K-rolissa Poeta reconocido en el portal

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    A beaten path,
    upon my back,
    mounting scars,
    of recurring attacks.

    A heart iced over,
    void of light,
    left shattered,
    no more will to fight.

    A mind of words,
    forced to silence,
    in a bloody mouth,
    beaten in offense.

    A body so broken,
    the drive all used,
    no will, power, or love,
    for so long abused.

    Rememberance of torture,
    this empty shell,
    in a shroud of darkness,
    living in hell.
     
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    K-rolissa, Oct 29, 2008
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    Francisco Iván Pazualdo Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Bueno pero hasta en ingles tienes metaforas eres maravillosa de eso no cabe duda ademas encontre rima mayor merito el tuyo y no hay que vivir en el infierno aunque nos torture tanto la vida y no hay que tener una boca sangrienta por las palabras forzadas al silencio amazing words is a pleasure read you kisses beautiful women.
     
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    Francisco Iván Pazualdo, Oct 29, 2008
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    NADLI Moderadora Mundopoetas Colombia Moderadores

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    El amor y el dolor se expresa, eh?..... Buenos versos escritos en inglés!:)

    Fue un gusto leerte!:::lengua1:::
     
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    NADLI, Oct 29, 2008
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    K-rolissa, Dec 9, 2008
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    muchas Gracias Nadli,
    :)
     
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    K-rolissa, Dec 9, 2008
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    thank you Indra, and even though the scars will forever be attached to the pain and the sorrow, the light of new memories yet to be born will bring back the flame to an indolent heart.

    hugs.
    :::hug:::
     
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    K-rolissa, Dec 10, 2008

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