The Chronicles Of The Sour Life (Part III, THE END)

PART III

Listen to the heart...
is calling death.
Listen to my heart...
It says:"soon , you'll forget".​

I mustn't deny I'm scared.
I know I will not see you again.
It was my fault. I told you once.​

I just have to go, there's no turning back.
look At those hammers....they are broking heads.
Soon it will be my turn. Blood will be poured in the road.​

I just said what I had to say.
The train is almost here. Goodbye....last life.
Goodbye....see how fast I run.
Goodbye....I'll never be back.​

THE END.​

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Pemberley Winter
[COLOR=black][B]I Know hwat you are..You're gonna be bad for my bussines. I can realize that.[/B][/COLOR]​

 

crossing the point of no return is always difficult... leaving something or someone you once loved needs a lot of courage because all those memories come back... making you weak... nice lines Pemb... a really pleasure stopping in your thoughts... regards. Good luck.

 

Thanks orees for having you here. Is a tremendous pleasure for me. You are correct about your interpretation. But when we are decided about some things.......we just let everything take its path.
Good to luck to you too.Pemb

 

Dearest Pemb,
I agree you will not return but to the sad "Chronicles Of The Sour Life" because they were already finished. You shouldn't prophesy what never it will happen: no hammer will break your head , you let the train goes away without you. You will remain with us so that you continue sharing your excellent verses although you infect us with your sadness. I hope to find you again in your next poem but with that joy that life is keeping for you.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

 

Dearest Ramiro,
Thank you for your comment. I couldn't be more grateful for having a friend like you. I dare say...that maybe the next poem will be happy....anyway....It doesn't mean just because "The Chronicles of The Sour Life" ended....that you won't get any sour poems still. But I'll try to change a little bit the path I'm walking on.
Thank you again for your comment. You are an excellent writer (even better than me).
Hugs for you
Pemb