Now that you left...

I have cried a river
but there is no coming back,
happiness left without a kiss
without a sad goodbye.

I have waited all night long
there is no us here anymore,
fool myself is what I do,
sitting here, searching for you.

Blame now, or do it tomorrow,
I am bleeding my feeling out,
you keep laughing as I suffer,
what to live for? theres no love.

Sky turns gray, cries like me,
look for me Im dying here,
take my eyes if you desire,
I lost all that I could see.
watch me die as days go by,
or come back and save me now.

 

Te recomiendo solicites a un moderador que transfiera este poema al foro La torre de Babel; el lugar destinado a poemas en idiomas diferentes al español.
Un beso , cuidate.

Daniel

 

Gracias Cipres, voy a intentar eso.

 

What a wonderful piece of art!!! Is so sad but so beautiful at the same time, that I don’t even know what to say
You’re a great writer, hope I read you soon again
Hug and kisses :::hug::::::hug:::

 

Hola amiga, aqui me la pusiste dificil, plisss, en español. Saludos
¡SONRIE!

 

"come back and save me now"... I enjoyed so much your lines, your sad is here. kisses.