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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lluviadeabril, Apr 20, 2010. Replies: 7 | Views: 1148

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  1. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    You are standing there
    in that five o’clock shadow
    and, now, words escape me.

    Blame that look on your face
    everything you’ve said and
    those eyes, those eyes
    that penetrate
    piercingly.



    I can hear your steps
    cross the room unhurriedly
    rapture comes in your place
    bare and impatient.



    I am motionless
    wanting to devour
    the space between bodies
    to let tremble and crave
    take over your gift and
    [SIZE=3]consume your power.[/SIZE]


    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]Blood rushes [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]your hands fall heavy [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]spoil me in your richness and[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]then let me hold you [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]let me hold you for hours[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]in the strength of a[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]gentle, but intolerant [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]straddle.[/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]​
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    aniksun Poeta adicto al portal

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    Me gusta Lluvia, me gustó mucho. Para tí mis estrellas de todos los idiomas posibles. Besos amiga.
     
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  3. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

    Good rhythm and a very passional and also beauttiful content.
    Simple, but wonderful.
    A pleasure April.
     
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  4. cesarfco.cd

    cesarfco.cd Corrector Corrector/a

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    Steps silently carry the calmness or the rapture of a long held desire.
    This is no time for subtlety ... is time.

    Good lines of April Rain.

    Thanks for sharing. A hug
     
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  5. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    The two embrace in the perfect exchange.

    Thank you Cesar for your poetic comment.
    A hug.
     
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  6. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Gracias aniksun
    el gusto es mío
    Besos bilingües.
     
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    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Thank you so much Redwing
    I appreciate your comment.
    A hug.
     
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    drdpre Poeta adicto al portal

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    greaaaat your text ... those steps and that five o'clock shadow, I knew that the shadows changed depending on the hours ...
    saludos
     
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