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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by FernandoLacrimae, Sep 17, 2007. Replies: 4 | Views: 1278

  1. FernandoLacrimae

    FernandoLacrimae Poeta recién llegado

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    You can see me,
    even when I don’tn exist.
    You can feel me,
    even when I’m not real.
    You can blame me,
    even when I wasn’t there.
    You can kill me,
    even when I’m already dead.
    You can tear me
    apart, even when I’m already broken.
    You can kiss me,
    even when I’m here for no longer.
    You can leave me,
    even when I’m already gone.
    You can wake me up,
    even when I don’t sleep at all.

    You can try to se me,
    even when your eyes are closed.
    You can try to feel me,
    even when you cut your hands off.
    You can try to blame me,
    even when no one will belive you.
    You can try to kill me,
    even when I’m trying too.
    You can try to tear me apart, even when I’m deeply torn.
    You can try to kiss me,
    even when I’m forlorn.
    You can try to leave me,
    even when I left you behind.
    You can try to wake me up,
    even when you know
    you can’t bring me to life.
     
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  2. Bastet*

    Bastet* Poeta adicto al portal

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    Todo tu escrito es hermoso, todo lo que significa cada una de tus frases son contradicciones que van mas allá de las palabras, quisiera robarme todo tu escrito y tenerlo frente a mi cama para recitarlo al mundo.

    "You can try to kill me even if I'm trying too ...it's amazing. I LOve it...."


    "You can tear me apart, even when I’m already broken...it's great..."

    xoxoxoxox



    Te recomiendo que lo traduscas para que las personas que no sepan ingles lo aprecien tambien, es hermoso.
     
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  3. FernandoLacrimae

    FernandoLacrimae Poeta recién llegado

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    muchas gracias por haberlo disfrutado tanto. Si kieres puedes imprimirlo y ponerlo en tu habitacion jeje. y kreo k si lo traduciré.
     
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  4. tamarapastrana

    tamarapastrana Poeta fiel al portal

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    Wow, its realy awesome, wow the best i ever saw, congratulations, i hope to read you soon again, bye bye
     
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  5. FernandoLacrimae

    FernandoLacrimae Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanx a lot! see you
     
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