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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Santiago_del_Alba, Feb 11, 2008. Replies: 1 | Views: 744

  1. Santiago_del_Alba

    Santiago_del_Alba Poeta recién llegado

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    I let you see in my eyes,
    caring my hand to your faith.
    May be I can say,
    no one could be like me.

    Passing through the time,
    with out regrets of who I was,
    just a reflex on my face,
    it looked like I was fine.

    But only in this Valentine,
    of broken hearts and diffusing smiles,
    of fiery love and dazing cries,
    could be my only chance.
     
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    Santiago_del_Alba, Feb 11, 2008
  2. SebastianLasker

    SebastianLasker Poeta recién llegado

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    I like your poem, your verses softly, am a good poem this one very well made in English.

    me gusto batante, tiene mucha movilidad de verso tu escrito, buen uso del idioma^^
     
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    SebastianLasker, Feb 12, 2008

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