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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by MIZU, Feb 18, 2008. Replies: 6 | Views: 956

  1. MIZU

    MIZU Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Spaces between the teeth hteet eht neewteb secapS
    By pronouncing your name eman rouy gnicnuonorp

    Strolling by the sound of your silence ecnelis rouy fo dnuos eht yb gnillortS
    Among steps short absence ecensba trosh spets gnomA

    Among many days with expiration dates setad noitaripxe htiw syad ynam gnomA
    Pieces of hand over the paper repap eht revo dnah fo seceiP.

    When trying to touch the
    words sdrow eht hcuot ot gniyrT.

    To be more about tuoba erom eb oT.

    Lead in the pen.

    Weigh the writing on the canvas of thoughts.
    When square meters, are miles. Among desires.
     
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  2. Puchopoet

    Puchopoet Poeta adicto al portal

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    ¿Y la traducción para cuando?
     
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  3. MIZU

    MIZU Poeta asiduo al portal

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    prometo hacerlas todas
     
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  4. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

    Trying to touch the words.....there is more in every word then what meets the eye, yet sometimes I preffer to ignore the depth of the sea...beautifull poem. Muak!
     
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  5. MIZU

    MIZU Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Many Thank For You Comment, Is Big Pleasure For Me,
    Many Thanks Again
    Big Hug
     
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  6. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    Interesting poem.. it makes me think, and that's too much, jaja.
    I like it, thank you for share it with us!
    Cheers

    Sol.
     
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  7. MIZU

    MIZU Poeta asiduo al portal

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    many thanks for you comment i'm in usa toght now i need to lear more english
     
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