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The ungrateful

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Santiago_del_Alba, Mar 20, 2008. Replies: 3 | Views: 906

  1. Santiago_del_Alba

    Santiago_del_Alba Poeta recién llegado

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    He, ungrateful...
    ashamed of his own,
    taked apart his family,
    by a supposely crown.

    He, ungrateful...
    in love of a stupid love,
    being miserable in life
    by who?, you never know.

    He, ungrateful...
    at least grow up,
    learned to be a gentleman
    but in cost of his own
     
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    Santiago_del_Alba, Mar 20, 2008
  2. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    I have a doubt... I think that it might be "in love with a stupid love" not of.
    Surely, you know more than me and it's right, who knows!
    Hugs!

    Sol.
     
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    Sol Mircovich, Mar 25, 2008
  3. Santiago_del_Alba

    Santiago_del_Alba Poeta recién llegado

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    Yes i know, i though of that point too, but the thing im trying to put in that sentence is he is in love of someone, so i think is better to say "in love of a stupid love" so that stupid love is her... because she dont love him and he felt stupid so his heart. But i thank you by your comment, and i think you know too, dont be too humble, people like to take ventage of that.
     
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    Santiago_del_Alba, Mar 26, 2008
  4. Estefyy

    Estefyy Invitado

    Me gusto muchisimo la simplicidad del poema.algo que lo hace claro y a la vez hermoso.Te super felicito!!!!!
     
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    Estefyy, Apr 5, 2008

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