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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by MASTER LY 22, Jan 15, 2021. Replies: 6 | Views: 340

  1. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Sobre las olas
    rizada espuma blanca
    llega a la playa
    de arenas solitarias
    con sus besos de seda.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 15, 2021
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  2. Rosmery Pinilla Acosta

    Rosmery Pinilla Acosta Moder.Surreal, Melanc. Imágen Staff Member Moderadores

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    Bello!
     
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    Rosmery Pinilla Acosta, Jan 15, 2021
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    Muchas gracias Rosmery por tu visita, me alegra que te guste el tanka. Abrazos.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 15, 2021
  4. Manfred Klish

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    Magnífica y apacible imagen la que engarza en sus excelentes versos. Vaya un saludo para usted.
     
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    Manfred Klish, Jan 16, 2021
  5. Sigifredo Silva Rodríguez

    Sigifredo Silva Rodríguez Poeta adicto al portal

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    Esas expresiones metafóricas embellecen en grado sumo tu trabajo. Felicitaciones. Te cuidas.

    Sigifredo
     
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    Sigifredo Silva Rodríguez, Jan 16, 2021
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    Muchas gracias Manfred, me alegra que te agrade mi poema. Un saludo cordial.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 16, 2021
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    Todo mi agradecimiento por tu visita y lindas palabras Sigfredo. Mis saludos mas cordiales.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 16, 2021

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