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Discussion in 'Poemas Melancólicos (Tristes)' started by Maramin, Nov 24, 2009. Replies: 13 | Views: 687

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Todas las tardes
    a tu puerta me acerco
    nunca me abres.

    En el camino un surco
    han grabado mis pies.

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    Maramin, Nov 24, 2009
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  2. Rosario de Cuenca Esteban

    Rosario de Cuenca Esteban Verso Suelto

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    Magnifico, amigo
    Un beso y estrellas
    Rosario
     
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    Rosario de Cuenca Esteban, Nov 25, 2009
  3. Mario Francisco LG

    Mario Francisco LG Un error en la Matrix

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    Lo siento ponderadamente espiritual, como si el clamor se ubicase de frente al Divino. Me acarrea remembranzas a un escrito de Paz y otro de Lope. Tranquilamente maravilloso el escrito, Maestro Marcos.


    Saluti


    Andrés "Ohhhh, i can´t trust!" Amendizábal :::gafas1:::.
     
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    Mario Francisco LG, Nov 25, 2009
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    Una historia completa en cinco versos.

    ¡Vaya manera de plasmarlo!

    Gracias Maramin por compartir tu versar. Un abrazo.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Nov 25, 2009
  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    No sabía que te pasaba algo parecido...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009
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    Maldonado Poeta veterano en el Portal

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    Bello haiku seguido de versos muy poeticos, un tinte inimitable de ud.

    saludos
     
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    Maldonado, Nov 25, 2009
  7. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Nov 26, 2009
  8. alex garcia

    alex garcia Poeta fiel al portal

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    Bello,amigo somo siempre derramas talento en cada entrega ,saludos....
     
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    alex garcia, Nov 26, 2009
  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro que hayas disfrutado con este Tanka, el que te recuerde algo de Lope, le da cierta categoría y trascendencia...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Nov 27, 2009
  10. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Pues ya ves, se puede hacer...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Dec 2, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Sí, es lo que se denomina un Tanka, ya sabes 5-7-5 7-7 donde el haiku sienta el tema y le sigue una aclaración...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Dec 2, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Dec 2, 2009
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    19.8.2010 Poeta recién llegado

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    Me encantó! Excelente!
    Abrazos,
    Roxane
     
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    19.8.2010, Dec 13, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Dec 14, 2009

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