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Senryû IV

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Riolita, Aug 5, 2023. Replies: 8 | Views: 576

  1. Riolita

    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Inspirado en un senryû de la compañera Luciana Rubio.


    cae el silencio
    de un alfiler su sombra
    es inaudita
     
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    Luciana Rubio Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Que fino el segundo verso. Un silencio que ensombrece, pero sí, los silencios ensombrecen pues a veces causan tristeza.
    Profundo decir. Un gusto leerte.
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Gracias por comentar estimada.
    Gran saludo.
     
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    Riolita, Aug 5, 2023
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Una preciosa imagen
    Que tengas buen día
     
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    María Baena, Aug 7, 2023
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    María! Contento de que pases.
    Gran saludo.
     
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    Riolita, Aug 7, 2023
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Profundos versos Riolita. Un abrazo.
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Gracias MASTER LY 22 por la complicidad.
    Abrazo
     
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    brillo que delataba
    su ligera presencia

    Saludos con afecto Riolita.
     
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    Gracias dragon_ecu por tu atinada interpretación.
    Gran saludo.
     
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