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My void

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by BlackHess, Oct 19, 2012. Replies: 1 | Views: 585

  1. BlackHess

    BlackHess Poeta recién llegado

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    I lay stripped down to the bone
    I lay forsaken in dark silence
    I feel so shattered
    Fallen
    Hurt
    Hand in hand with my own lonesome

    Cause I'm guilty of drawing illusions
    That now like blades cut me inside
    Guilty of seeking in vain
    Something that could bring me to life

    Inside I feel so crumbled
    Cause never been good enough
    Inside I feel so shattered
    Cause this void eats me alive

    And I'm guilty of drawing illusions
    That now like blades cut me inside
    Guilty of seeking in vain
    Something that could bring me to life
     
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  2. Miguel Porcel

    Miguel Porcel Invitado

    Hi friend, it's a sad poem, good but pretty sad. I claim you to stand up and strenght your will. The sun comes out, you can fill up your void with life cause it'll always have an appointment with you. I hope you r doing ok.
    All the best, Mike.
     
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