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My Sacrifice

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Just Another Dreamer, Apr 30, 2007. Replies: 1 | Views: 777

  1. Just Another Dreamer

    Just Another Dreamer Poeta recién llegado

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    Every day, every night,
    Every second, another fight.
    A lot of fears, a sea of tears,
    Many chances to surrender…

    But I said: no.

    I’ve a powerful reason
    To believe and grow high.
    I’ll wait for the next season,
    Another time to see you, right.

    It’s my sacrifice,
    An ocean of sweet sacred tears.
    A war of tenderness and pleasure.
    A beautiful garden of love.

    When you’re far, when you’re here,
    When you’re near, next to me…

    I think that the hope is gone,
    That all is gone…

    But I still saying: no.

    I’ll not give up,
    I was fighting,
    I’m bleeding,
    And I’ll die for you.

    That’s the price of love.
    I love to love you.

    That’s my sacrifice,
    A paradise of flames and sorrow.
    A hell of hugs and kisses.
    A beautiful garden of love.

    To surrender?
    To leave my dreams?

    I say: NO!
     
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  2. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    First time i read you and ...is not bad at all, your hope seems shattered and your strength gone, but your will thankfully untouched. Nice! see you around.

    P.S. The verb -to bleed- (sangrar) in proggresive form is -bleeding-, sowy, i had to point it out.
     
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