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Morning Breath

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Aonika, Jul 11, 2008. Replies: 3 | Views: 862

  1. Aonika

    Aonika Poeta recién llegado

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    The sun is shaking
    Wake up my love
    I´ll make you pancakes
    On my little stove.

    Kiss me with your lips
    With your morning breath
    I don´t care baby
    I don´t care.

    Brush your teeth now
    Wish me luck
    Today I will go
    To my wonderful job.

    The sun is shaking
    Wake up my love
    I´ll make you pancakes
    On the stove.

    Tomorrow again
    The sun will come out
    And with morning breath
    I will kiss your mouth
    And with morning breath
    I will kiss your mouth…
     
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    Aonika, Jul 11, 2008
  2. Assar

    Assar Poeta recién llegado

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    Very good! jeje Yo creo que se dice I will kiss your lips and not I will kiss your mouth but it is a very nice poem
     
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    Assar, Jul 11, 2008
  3. Aonika

    Aonika Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanks but in poetry everything is posible from kissing mouths to jump mountains
     
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    Aonika, Jul 11, 2008
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    Assar Poeta recién llegado

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    Jejeje... buena respuesta :::sorpresa1:::
     
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    Assar, Jul 11, 2008

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