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Llueve (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Poemas Generales' started by Maramin, Aug 5, 2009. Replies: 24 | Views: 1187

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    ¡QUÉ EXALTACIÓN DE LA BICICLETA! ¿O ES EXALTACIÓN DEL PARAGUAS? TE ESTRELLO...

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    JOP PIOBB, Aug 5, 2009
  3. margotdelcastillo

    margotdelcastillo Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    ¡genial!
    besos
    Margot
     
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    margotdelcastillo, Aug 5, 2009
  4. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Digamos exaltación de optimismo...:::banana:::

    Es fácil estrellarse con el piso mojado y el paraguas en una mano...:::eek:hmy:::

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    Maramin, Aug 6, 2009
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    lore1 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Bravo. Muy original y con gran sentido del humor. Un saludo y estrellas.
     
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    lore1, Aug 6, 2009
  7. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Aug 7, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Aug 17, 2009
  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Aug 17, 2009
  10. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro que haya sido de tu agrado....:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Aug 17, 2009
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    ana zar Poeta fiel al portal

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    Tienes razón...solo hay que buscar una solución: ¿que mejor que un paraguas para el agua o el sol? En serio,muy bueno el haiku.Un saludo cariñoso Maramin
    Ana
     
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    ana zar, Aug 17, 2009
  12. LOLA PEREZ

    LOLA PEREZ Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Que llueva, que llueva
    la virgen de la cueva,
    con paraguas o sin el nos viene muy bien agua,
    nos remoja, nos alegra y nos llena de esperanza.
    Estrellas, pero no te estrelles con la bicicleta
    que el suelo está resbaladizo.
    Besos
    Lola
     
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    LOLA PEREZ, Aug 17, 2009
  13. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Es un Haiga medio humorístico que pone buena cara al mal tiempo...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Aug 19, 2009
  14. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Tendré mucho cuidadín , amiga Lola, gracias por dejarme tan lindo comentario...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Aug 19, 2009
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    fallen_raven Poeta adicto al portal

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    Jajajaja, es buena esa, nunca se me hubiera ocurrido.
    La voy a mandar cuando llueva jaja.
    Un saludo.
     
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    fallen_raven, Aug 19, 2009
  16. NOSTALGIA

    NOSTALGIA Ser Nostálgico y triste

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    Wow, esto es un himno al optimismo, me encantó. Gustazo venir a leerte
    Estrellas y besos
     
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    NOSTALGIA, Aug 19, 2009
  17. Xuacu

    Xuacu Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Agg por dios que pasada. Me encantó. BRAVOOOOOOOOOOOO
    Un abrazo poeta.
     
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    Xuacu, Aug 19, 2009
  18. Rosario de Cuenca Esteban

    Rosario de Cuenca Esteban Verso Suelto

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    Genial y sencillo
    Muy bonito, amigo
    un beso y estrellas
    Rosario
     
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    Rosario de Cuenca Esteban, Aug 19, 2009
  19. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Es sólo la copia de algo que vi...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Aug 21, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Complacido recibo tu amable comentario celebrando que mi presentación haya sido de tu agrado...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Aug 21, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    El caso es que hace unos días vi este haiku en vivo en una foto de un periódico popular hablando de lluvias en China...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Oct 24, 2009
  22. Rosario de Cuenca Esteban

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    Idea brillante,jajajajaj
    Un beso y estrellas
    Rosario
     
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    Rosario de Cuenca Esteban, Oct 24, 2009
  23. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Gracias, amiga Rosario, me encanta tu contínua presencia en mis temas...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Oct 24, 2009
  24. Libra *M*

    Libra *M* Dolors Sans - Libra *M*

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    JAJAJA, muy bueno tu haiku!!!!

    Petonets y mis estrellas,

    Libra *M*
     
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    Libra *M*, Oct 27, 2009
  25. Maramin

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