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Discussion in 'Poemas Generales' started by Carla Campos, Sep 1, 2006. Replies: 9 | Views: 1657

  1. Carla Campos

    Carla Campos Poeta recién llegado

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    ...... I Wish....

    I wish I could go to a place that no one’s been before
    I wish to stay there, and enjoy my time alone
    I wish I could be me and wouldn't have to be what the world want's me to be...

    I wish to run as fast as I can, feeling the wind blowing my face and the grass trough my feet, hear nothing but my self and animal creatures of the earth …

    I wish to wake in the morning light, no alarm beside my bed; hear the birds and there songs, look at the sunrise in
    His circle shape.

    I wish one day my wish to come true maybe not as perfect but as similar I do wish for my wish….

    http://65.214.37.88/ts?t=5825140567316131155


    ... Deseo ...
    Deseo poder ir a un lugar que nadie a conosido antes
    Deseo permanecer allí, y gozar mi tiempo sola
    Deseo poder ser yo y no tener que ser lo que desea
    el mundo. Deseo correr lo mas rápido que pueda,
    sintiendo el viento soplar en mi cara y de la grama
    sentir en mis pies, no oír nada sola mente ami misma
    y los animales creaturas de la tierra… Deseo despertar
    [COLOR=blue]en la luz de la mañana, ningúna alarmar al lado de mi cama; [/COLOR]
    [SIZE=3][COLOR=blue]oír los pájaros y sus canciones, mirar la salida del sol en [/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Garamond][SIZE=3][COLOR=blue]su forma círcular. Deseo a un día mi deseo se agua realidad [/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [COLOR=blue][FONT=Garamond][SIZE=3]quizá no tan perfecto pero talbes un poco similar, deseo mi deseo….[/SIZE][/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Garamond]
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  2. sentimientos

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    Carla, I know that perhaps you speak in English, but much people will not understand to you here, is better to write in Spanish, to correct your orthographic failures you can go to a Word, I I understand a little English, but I know that much people will not comment out to you because they does not know the language.
    Kisses for you.
     
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  3. Carla Campos

    Carla Campos Poeta recién llegado

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    Hey wuz up! way ahead, I did....whent to google, for a lil. help :::sonreir1:::

    thanx Kisses back to you...:::hug:::

    Blessings
    C.C. :)
     
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  4. DeVoRoUx

    DeVoRoUx Poeta veterano y reconocido en el portal.

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    los deseos...que expresas en tus letras... son deseos salidos de un alma hermosa como la tuya...bien plasamda en tus letras...un abrazo de corazon...mi dulce carlita...
     
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  5. sentimientos

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    Carla, gracias por escribirlo en español, verás que ahora te leeran más.
    Besos preciosa.
     
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  6. almacautiva

    almacautiva Poeta adicto al portal

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    Thanks about the translation, Carla.
    This is a Spanish poetry site, as you can see,
    but we also have an space called "La torre de Babel"
    where you'll be able to post all your English poems.
    You'll find it up in the index. Give it a bit of life !!
    Cheers.
     
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  7. Carla Campos

    Carla Campos Poeta recién llegado

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    Gracias mi querido amigo,
    Bendiciones
    C.C.
     
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  8. Carla Campos

    Carla Campos Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanks I realy apreciate your coment, it's realy helpful to me, and also thanks for the info. on "La torre de babel" I will check that out..

    Blessings
    C.C.
     
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  9. romeo de tibaldo

    romeo de tibaldo Poeta recién llegado

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    yo pienso que cada persona debe ser como es y no como deberia ser, siguiendo su naturaleza, su corazon, sus instintos de pureza y amor. es bueno leerte sigue asi.
     
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  10. Carla Campos

    Carla Campos Poeta recién llegado

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    Yo tanbien lo pienso pero abeses entre tanta responsabilidad y tanto ejemplo
    que hay quedar no te queda nada mas que ser tu, en otro vestir

    Bendiciones
    C.C.
     
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