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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Zulma Martínez, Jun 9, 2025. Replies: 6 | Views: 93

  1. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Un viento frío;
    los árboles rezongan
    lloran las fuentes
     
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    Zulma Martínez, Jun 9, 2025
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    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Una sensación de angustia e incomodidad.

    Saludos
     
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    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Es lo que quise transmitir. El viento frío no suele ser agradable... Saludos.
     
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    Zulma Martínez
    Un viento frío;
    los árboles rezongan
    lloran las fuentes    ​

    Dragón_Ecu.
    del techado del porche
    los carámbanos crecen    ​
     
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    dragon_ecu, Jun 14, 2025 at 5:45 PM
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    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Con tu agregado se transformó en un hermoso poema... Muchas gracias! Saludos.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Precioso Hokku Zulma, me encanta.
    Abrazos y felicitaciones.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 15, 2025 at 1:27 PM
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    Muchas gracias por tu alentador comentario, Laly! Abrazos.
     
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