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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Pessoa, Oct 26, 2023. Replies: 5 | Views: 396

  1. Pessoa

    Pessoa Moderador Foros Surrealistas. Staff Member Moderadores

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    Labrador

    Hombre abatido

    sobre dura mancera

    eres tu dios.
     
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    Pessoa, Oct 26, 2023
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    Esto no es haiku, amigo Miguel.
     
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    Maramin, Oct 26, 2023
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    Pessoa Moderador Foros Surrealistas. Staff Member Moderadores

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    Mi querido amigo:
    Ya sabes que mi lucha con el verdadero haiku está perdida de antemano. En adelante lo llamará "5-7-5", así, en abstracto. Agradezco tu buen talante. Un cordial saludo,
    miguel
     
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    Pessoa, Oct 27, 2023
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    Maramin, Oct 27, 2023
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    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Un sentimiento de reverencia o desesperación.

    Saludos
     
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    Alde, Apr 4, 2025
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    Pessoa Moderador Foros Surrealistas. Staff Member Moderadores

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    Gracias, Alde, querido compañero. Agradezco tu presencia en ests apartados rincones de mi obra. Un abrazo,
    miguel
     
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    Pessoa, Apr 4, 2025
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