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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Pemberley Winter, Apr 4, 2011. Replies: 6 | Views: 784

  1. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Like a first cut,
    Like a first look.
    Feel the adrenaline going all over your being.
    Feel the anxiety that you breath.


    Be ready to make it all over again.
    Make mistakes, have a laugh or two.
    And always remember, that life was made for the two.


    I know this can be, I know the chances of you and me.
    Make everything special, make everyting worth.
    Make a fresh new beggining..and the rest...the rest..would be soon told.


    Copyrights Reserved.


    Pemberley Winter
    I Know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my business.. I can realize that.
     
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  2. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    “Like a first look.” Nothing like it. Imagine a breath of anguish and then…..:)

    A huge hug Pem.
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Thank you April for being here as always. I appreciated!. tons of kisses!.
    Pemb
     
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  4. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

    The ending is quite good, i liked it a lot, and besides... i can see the psositive pem i like.

    Great poem, it somehow reminded me... how on earht does roller coaster, coster, whatever, is writen? pff... ok, you know what i meant.

    A pleasure pemby.

    Kisses.
     
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  5. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Wowww. you were quite confused when you wrote that. I didn't get a word! hahahaha. but don't worry..I understand that you liked my poem and that you like me as a positivist! hahahaha. and it's ROLLER COASTER! ;)
    hugs for you darky.
    MISS P.
     
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  6. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    Lovely poem as always my dear friend. It is very good, keep it up:) Love you, Winterfairy
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Awe, You always draw a smile on my face!. It is wonderful to see you here!. Thank you sooooooooo much Winterfairyyyyyy. Tons of love and joy!
     
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