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Exodus

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by BlackHess, Jul 17, 2012. Replies: 2 | Views: 683

  1. BlackHess

    BlackHess Poeta recién llegado

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    I'm tired of wondering in this land of illusions
    Tired of watching the rain turn to cry
    Tired of feeling my crimsom lips break
    Under this senseless obsession of mine

    I'm done being deceived by your fragile caress
    That break my lips in doubt
    That fills my mind with poison
    And has me frozen in time

    I silence your gestures of affection
    For no longer they catch my eye
    For no longer they mean anything
    To this broken heart of mine.
     
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    BlackHess, Jul 17, 2012
  2. Meduza

    Meduza Poeta recién llegado

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    Nice :D Good job!!
     
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    Meduza, Jul 17, 2012
  3. Aisha Baranowska

    Aisha Baranowska Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Nice expression of your emotions - or, better to say, lack of emotion... ;-) Whatever. Well-done! :)
     
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    Aisha Baranowska, Jul 23, 2012

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