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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Pemberley Winter, Sep 1, 2012. Replies: 3 | Views: 938

  1. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    The answer, you'll later understand
    frightening how you feel like a cold morning to me,
    can't get through the night.
    Don't you wish you were breakable?
    Feel how it feels to me.
    Has anybody else but me ever felt this way before?

    You'll understand,
    this is not the last night.
    Can't grow apart.
    As long as we are here, enchained I am.
    I won't leave you.
    Cursed I am.


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    Andres Zuñiga Poeta fiel al portal

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  3. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    Is it right or wrong to be enchained? is it a curse or not? I think it all depends on how you feel about the person you are with... but still, i may be wrong as always. By the way, who's the curse to who? I'm thinking o it right now... and both could be the curse to each other and be enchained... unless of course une of you wouldn't feel the same.

    Hey, you said you were out of ideas... then, what's this i'm reading? of course, it's a short little poem that makes me think abot humanity and love... = / hard it is to me.

    It has been a pleasure my dear... and yes, you alo have an enormous place in my heart my dear.

    Kisses and hugs.
     
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  4. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Well...when I tried to write this, I thought of a girl quite fragile that can't leave him. He hurts, he abuses her in every way, and she can't leave, she'd feel guilty, she'd feel like she is the one who is doing wrong, she is so blind about this, that she decides to stay, enchained, she is cursed 'cause she can't go, she has to stay there for eternity and suffer in silence. Quite dark..huh?
    This just popped up in mi mind ^^
    Tons of kisses
    Pemb
     
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