Cosmic Love

COSMIC LOVE​

As I move my feet, I can hear your beat.
I put my ear into your heart and screams appear with no harm.
I let you free of that punishment, I'll forgive all you've done.
The drumming in my heart says you're the one.​

You think you are blind, in this lost galaxy,
But I'm a girl with two eyes, and I'll show you what you mean.
This is our cosmic love, that travels faster that anyone can wish.
It is only because I desire it with every fibre of my being.​

You build everything that I want,
I honestly know you got the love,
The drumming song in my head, says here is our chance.
Gonna travel with you, my cosmic love.
We'll go....further than stars that can collapsed.
I'll explain everything you want, I won't separate from your heart.​

By Pemberley Winter
[B]I Know what you are..You're gonna be bad for my bussines...I can realize that.[/B]
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Dear Pemberley,
It makes me happy that this time your poem of love is only of love You´ve pardoned, forgotten what he has done to you. You say your ear tells you that he's the indicated one. You become his guide and you go with him to the galaxies, and you take us -your readers- to those galaxies, too. Thanks for this cosmic poem and trip that you've offered us. If I were kidding I'd tell you: "you deserve that also the heroes of Avatar congratulate you". But I won't say that because my comment is very serious.
My sincere congratulations, prolific poet.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

 

My dearest Ramiro,
I couldn't be happier with your comment. I'm so glad that you liked it. I think that every writer expects the reader to feel like he is travelling with his words---so I'm happy I did it with you my friend.
I've seen AVATAR, which I think was amazing........and I'll be thrilled if they congratulate me.
Hugs, Pemberley

 

Purely romantic and tender, you have two eyes to guide him, that sounds amazing.
You know, i like a lot to see you as a romantic.
Hugs.

 

thank you for your comment my dearest redwinggggg:::hug:::. I'm glad you like me as a romantic...although sometimes is hard to me to write it.you know me....I'm in the "SAD wave":::gafas1:::. Thanks for passing by.
Love, Pemberley