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Discussion in 'Poemas de Amor' started by Maramin, Nov 24, 2009. Replies: 22 | Views: 1125

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    CONDENA

    Olvidando que es condena
    haber venido a este mundo
    disfruto un amor profundo
    que endulza toda mi pena.
    La mujer que me encadena
    y es de mi alma carcelera
    se convierte en prisionera
    entre mis brazos amantes.
    Los sueños más delirantes
    se cumplen de esta manera.

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    Maramin, Nov 24, 2009
  2. EL LEGENDARIO

    EL LEGENDARIO Poeta veterano en el portal

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    profundo, interesante rima,
    sinceros versos
    te felicito
    saludos

    EDU
     
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    EL LEGENDARIO, Nov 24, 2009
  3. Sol de mañana

    Sol de mañana Poeta veterana en el Portal

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    Bellisimo, una condena que vale la pena, saludos y estrellitas.
     
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    Sol de mañana, Nov 24, 2009
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    Muy buena décima Maramín.

    Siempre hay algo nuevo bajo el sol.

    Un abrazo.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Nov 24, 2009
  5. Nizamettin Esen Haymanali

    Nizamettin Esen Haymanali Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Una dulce condena. Tierno tema de amor, gracias por compartir tus letras. Saludos.
     
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    Nizamettin Esen Haymanali, Nov 24, 2009
  6. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Jorge Toro Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Excelente décima. Un placer leerle.

    Saludos!
     
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    Jorge Toro, Nov 24, 2009
  8. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Clara Schoenborn Poeta adicto al portal

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    Bello testimonio amigo Marcos. Aunque pienso que la vida no es condena, es muy, pero muy bella. Un abrazo.
     
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    Clara Schoenborn, Nov 24, 2009
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    alex garcia Poeta fiel al portal

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    Bella décima amigo, un placer leerte como siempre...abrazos...
     
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    alex garcia, Nov 24, 2009
  11. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Y estas condenas no se protestan.

    Preciosas líneas, un placer leerlas.
     
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    lluviadeabril, Nov 24, 2009
  12. Mask

    Mask Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    es ......corto y bueno, preciso y contundente...

    genial..
    estrellas.
     
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    Mask, Nov 24, 2009
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    Qué grato encontrarse con algo breve
    y de tan alto significado.

    Una sorpresa grata encontrarme con tu poema.



    ___________________________________________LEO
     
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    SMILEATER, Nov 24, 2009
  14. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009
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    Agradecido quedo contigo por pasar, leer y comentar...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009
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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009
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    Cierto es lo que dices, amiga Elisalle, me encanta ser conciso y claro en mis poemas, es por ello que me acojo el encuadre de las décimas y sonetos que decoran con ritmo mis poemas...:::hug:::

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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Es figurado, amiga Clara, pura metáfora que queda bien en el encuadre del poema dándole un toque poético a la composición...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Agradeciendo visita lectura y comentario así como las estrellas con las que decoras mi firmamento...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Desde luego son condenas autoinfligidas...:::banana:::

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    Celebro haberte gratamente sorprendido, y que te haya resultado convincente mi presentación poética...:::banana:::

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    Maramin, Nov 25, 2009

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