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Broken Hearts

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Pemberley Winter, Apr 14, 2010. Replies: 4 | Views: 719

  1. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    -BROKEN HEARTS-


    My dreams do not dry on their own,
    There is still a point, on holding on to those.
    The memories I do not, I do not want to forget.
    Are all over my body and head.


    The black moon will light my face,
    You will see me dead,
    My broken heart is an empty house.


    Because I tryed to float,
    Float over your storm.
    But I fell before I could tell you how I was.


    Because my broken heart, will never heal.
    My love for you I will carry still.
    All the nights of hate, all the shouts and nightmares
    Will vanish like a shadow in my head.


    Let me be in you heart, let me feel, let me desire.
    My broken heart will fall apart.
    It will be floating, floating by chance.


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  2. Redwing

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    Broken heart sounds truly sad :(, it has a great emotional charge on it and well... at the end... i'm thinking in some weird things, the ending... i thought the word zombified, or white walls.. the emptyness... i don't know... like beig in the limbo...
    I guess i'll leave it a that.
    Pem... i missed you much, thanks for appearing.
    Hugs fr you and lots of huge kisses my dear.
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Thanks Reddd for being here..I missed so much posting poems!, Is nice that the end is interesting for you,,,I think it makes the reader hesitate on what it is all about. the limbo, huh?...pretty interesting hahahhah.
    Thankss for your comment.,
    Kissesss darrkkkman
     
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  4. fragilprincesa

    fragilprincesa Poeta asiduo al portal

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    What a lovely poem, sad words are the ones you wrote in this writing but it’s really beautiful.
    Oh broken hearts are so painful, to forget is so hard and if we talk about healing ourselves sometimes it’s just impossible
    Hope you don’t have a broken heart
    Hug and kisses :::hug::::::hug::::::hug:::
     
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  5. Pemberley Winter

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    You've done a perfect interpretation, you are right. There's nothing more horrible to have a broken heart. We don't know if the wounded heart which is broken will heal, or if it won't heal ever. And that's why we are so afraid.
    Thank you, Princesa,
    Pemb
     
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