1. Guest, ven y descarga gratuitamente el cuarto número de nuestra revista literaria digital "Eco y Latido"

    !!!Te va a encantar, no te la pierdas!!!

    Dismiss Notice

You Make Me Die

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Raven, May 25, 2006. Replies: 3 | Views: 1737

  1. Raven

    Raven Poeta fiel al portal

    Joined:
    Apr 7, 2005
    Messages:
    728
    Likes Received:
    2
    Sitting on my bed
    When the lights are off
    I can still see you shining
    Right in my head.
    And as light grows
    I flood in memories
    Feeling how my body drowns
    And my spirit goes…

    Far, far away.


    *In the sea of tears
    Under a sky of fears
    I wonder
    Do you know you make me cry?
    Do you know you make me die?


    I’m sailing in my sheets
    To the land of broken dreams
    Where your precious heart
    Beside mine still beats.
    If I still continue crying
    I’ll drain a river and then
    Swim to a distant place
    Where to go on dying…

    Away from you.


    *In the sea of tears
    Under a sky of fears
    I wonder
    Do you know you make me cry?
    Do you know you make me die?

    Do you know you make me cry?
    Do you know you make me die?

    Do you know you make me die?    ​
     
    #1
    Raven, May 25, 2006
  2. Ingrid Lavigne

    Ingrid Lavigne Poeta adicto al portal

    Joined:
    May 26, 2006
    Messages:
    1,101
    Likes Received:
    2
    i'ts cool!! congratulations Raven

    Sincerely: InGrId!
     
    #2
    Ingrid Lavigne, May 29, 2006
  3. Ary

    Ary Poeta recién llegado

    Joined:
    Jun 9, 2006
    Messages:
    10
    Likes Received:
    0
    I love it!!! keep it up!!
    ~ARY~
     
    #3
    Ary, Jun 12, 2006
  4. Draket

    Draket Poeta asiduo al portal

    Joined:
    May 26, 2006
    Messages:
    417
    Likes Received:
    0
    your poem reaches a deep place of my heart, and many memories return again from past.
     
    #4
    Draket, Jun 16, 2006

Share This Page