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Libre en el vacío / Hutsean aske / Free in the void

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by OscarAV, Jul 20, 2025. Replies: 3 | Views: 267

  1. OscarAV

    OscarAV Poeta recién llegado

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    Libre en el vacío,
    sin sostén y abrazado,
    digiriendo con saliva
    ese sabor curioso,
    leve y acelerado.

    Hutsean aske,
    euskarririk gabe eta besarkatuta,
    listuz digeritzen
    zapore bitxi hori,
    arina eta azeleratua.

    Free in the void,
    unsupported and embraced,
    digesting with saliva
    that curious flavour,
    light, and accelerated.
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México Staff Member Moderadores

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    A delicate balance between vulnerability and freedom. The imagery of being both unsupported and embraced creates a tender tension, while the “curious flavour” suggests an openness to new, fleeting experiences. A subtle and evocative piece.
     
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    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Sensory experiences enrich life.
    Freedom can be accompanied by solitude and reflection.

    Greetings
     
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    OscarAV Poeta recién llegado

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    Muchas gracias por vuestras palabras.
    Eskerrik asko zure hitzengatik.
    Thanks for your words.
     
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