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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by MASTER LY 22, May 27, 2025. Replies: 9 | Views: 169

  1. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    La densa bruma
    oculta la gaviota,
    otoñal alba.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, May 27, 2025
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  2. Alde

    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Una bonita atmósfera de contemplación.

    Saludos
     
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    Alde, May 27, 2025
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    crisantemo Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Qué bonita imagen me la imagino con un Sol blanco por la bruma y el ave tan solo esbozada. Un abrazo
     
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    crisantemo, May 29, 2025
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias Crisantemo por leerme y tu comentario. Se veía como si hubiera sido pintada por Claude Monet.
    Un gran abrazo y muy buen fin de semana.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, May 29, 2025
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias amigo Alde por ser siempre mi primer lector y comentar.
    Un gran abrazo.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, May 29, 2025
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias Maria Jose por leerme y el me gusta.
    Abrazo.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, May 29, 2025
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias Ansel por la lectura y el me gusta.
    Un gran abrazo.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 8, 2025
  8. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Bellísima imagen, Laly! Me sentí viviendo esa atmósfera otoñal... Abrazo!
     
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    Zulma Martínez, Jun 9, 2025 at 10:37 PM
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Agradezco tu lectura y precioso comentario Zulma.
    Abrazos.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 9, 2025 at 11:13 PM
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    La densa bruma
    oculta la gaviota,
    otoñal alba.    ​

    Dragón_Ecu
    Mientras el sol se oculta
    las sombras se confunden...    ​

    Es un haiku precioso Laly. Gracias por compartirlo.
     
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    dragon_ecu, Jun 14, 2025 at 4:48 PM
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