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TABÚ Rincón de los Haykús y Senryús atípicos, prohibidos, raros y misteriosos

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    Roza la cumbre
    el cóndor con su sombra,
    cima nevada.    ​
     
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    Cierto que hay musgo
    en la estatua del prócer
    peor es nada.

    Dos o tres nidos
    en la estatua del prócer
    hacen de ofrenda

    Y así con todo
    mierda cómo interroga
    tanta vigencia
     
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    Luciana Rubio Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Hermoso Homenaje. Tiene un aire irónico de respeto. Muy bueno.
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Va con ironía, sí. Creo que está más para sociopolíticos. Gracias compañera.
     
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    Riolita, Jun 19, 2023
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Viejas estatuas
    intentan recordarnos
    glorias pasadas.    ​
     
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    Fin de la luz.
    Del polvo estelar renacen
    universos
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Sólo he venido
    a esperar que devuelvas
    mi impertinencia.
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    ¡Diente de león!
    Humilde peregrino.
    Quién no te sopló
    con asombro o hastío!
    Siémbrate ahora
    ahora que no hay niños!
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Nadie ha perdido
    un trébol de tres hojas
    entre sus libros.
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Eso que traes
    desde la cuna y también
    es testamento.
     
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    Riolita Poeta adicto al portal

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    Piden clemencia,
    señor, los moderados.
    ¡Dásela a medias!
     
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    Columna de humo
    surge en el horizonte,
    monte incendiado.    ​
     
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    Rompe la calma
    de la naturaleza,
    ruidoso tren.    ​
     
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    Sobre el tejado
    se ha subido la luna,
    deslumbra al gato.    ​
     
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    Mucho trabajo
    para los barrenderos
    tanta hojarasca.    ​
     
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    Pasito a paso
    en amena conversa,
    pesan los años.    ​
     
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    Caminan lento
    en la templada tarde,
    los pies hinchados.    ​
     
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    Uno de mayo,
    a los trabajadores
    les hacen fiesta.    ​
     
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    A la sombra del árbol
    caen maduras las manzanas
    ¡los gusanos mareados!

    (variación 7-9-7 como contrapropuesta al 8-11-8 del proyecto haikuñol)
     
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    La calle es nuestra,
    con los monopatines
    la dominamos.    ​
     
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    Verde es la leña,
    el diario es más oscuro;
    me arden los ojos.
     
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    Gritan los niños
    jugando a las canicas
    sobre la acera.    ​
     
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    Bajo el reloj
    un nido de minutos
    vacío espera
     
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    Dertodesking Poeta recién llegado

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    Repite el eco
    mis grito de socorro
    ante los lobos.
     
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    Noche estival,
    en el claro del cielo
    miles de estrellas.    ​
     
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    frágiles cometas
    se elevan llevando sueños
    los vientos de agosto

    (variación haikuñol 6-8-6)
     
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    Calleja oscura.
    El roce en la cara
    de unas bragas húmedas
     
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    Siguen las tórtolas
    con sus roncas llamadas:
    ¿Qué quieres tú?    ​
     
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    Túnel encofrado
    cavaron delincuentes,
    destino un banco.    ​
     
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    De nuevo agosto,
    fiestas en muchos pueblos,
    mes muy festivo.    ​
     
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