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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262058

  1. Maramin

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    Invierno gélido,
    cuelgan estalactitas
    de los aleros.
     
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    De los aleros
    caen gotas de lluvia.
    Asoma el sol.
     
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    Asoma el sol
    por azul horizonte
    reverberante.
     
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    Reverberante
    la pradera nevada

    y silenciosa.
     
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    Y silenciosa
    la serpiente se acerca,
    corre el ratón.
     
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    Corre el ratón
    hacia la madriguera.
    Águila calva.
     
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    Águila calva
    planea vigilante
    sobre los cerros.
     
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    Sobre los cerros
    la nube solitaria.
    Abajo el río.
     
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    Abajo el río
    se escurre casi seco,
    fondo del valle.
     
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    Fondo del valle
    cubierto de neblina.
    Otoñal alba.
     
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    Otoñal alba,
    guedejas blanquecinas
    entre los árboles.
     
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    Entre los árboles
    ardilla entre bellotas.
    Troncos musgosos.
     
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    Troncos musgosos
    cortados y apilados.
    Los leñadores.
     
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    Los leñadores
    fatigados avanzan
    entre eucaliptos.
     
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    Entre eucaliptos
    se recogen las hojas.
    Los caramelos.
     
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    Los caramelos
    en la caramelera
    tientan al niño.
     
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    Tienta el niño
    buñuelos de la abuela
    tímidamente.
     
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    Tímidamente
    la sonrisa ilumina
    su bello rostro.
     
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    Su bello rostro
    tras polvo y telaraña
    roto el retrato
     
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    Roto el retrato,
    manos enfurecidas
    lo hacen pedazos.
     
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    Lo hacen pedazos
    para atizar el fuego
    al árbol viejo
     
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    Al árbol viejo
    le podan con cuidado
    las altas ramas.
     
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    Las altas ramas
    Las altas ramas
    parecen incrustadas
    entre las nubes.
     
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    Entre las nubes
    cruzan rayos, los truenos
    dejan sus ecos.
     
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    Dejan sus ecos
    los aullidos de lobos,
    noche de luna.
     
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    noche de luna
    el sendero es claro
    hasta la villa
     
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    Hasta la villa
    llegan los peregrinos,
    los pies llagados.
     
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    Noche oscura,
    La luna en está noche
    se ha eclipsado.
     
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    Se ha eclipsado
    el sol al encontrase
    la luna en medio
    .​
     
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    La luna en medio
    de nuestro frio lecho,
    ambos despiertos.
     
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